Fix-up sandbox for when I mess something up/ am rewriting my own work

Soft light filtered into the tent and danced upon the lonely and empty floor. It was an ancient place with outdated and rusty show equipment littering the ceiling and back rooms. Screams and giggles filtered in from the outside and three teenage boys came crashing in with young girl following behind them. They were all covered in dust from head to toe and smiling like mad.

and so she picked up her pen and wrote… The letter took hours to write and it took years to gather up the courage to visit them again. Though she finally did, and when she visited she talked for what seemed like years to all of them. She apologized for all she had done and they comforted her, telling her that it was a mistake when tears clung to her eyes. She hushed herself and watch them with unwavering eyes as the sun set behind her. When the visitors finally came to an end and she set the letter on her brother's stoney doorstep with a final hushed apology. As she left she turned around to see their doorsteps, for what would probably be the last time, and on them were the words:

Holy Family Graveyard.

Girl anciently commits arson and kills all three boys, she grows up in anguish and writes them a letter and takes it to their grave
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