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VIDEO OR AUDIO LOG


DATE: XX/YY/ZZZZ


[BEGIN LOG.]

PERSON A: Something I've said!

[Thing that is happening.]

PERSON A: (shouting) Something I'm shouting!

[Another thing that happens.]

[END LOG.]

> = **VIDEO OR AUDIO LOG**
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> **PERSON A:** Something I've said! 
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> **[**//Thing that is happening.//**]**
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> **PERSON A:** (//shouting//) Something I'm shouting!
> 
> **[**//Another thing that happens.//**]**
> 
> **[**END LOG.**]**

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Space reserved; I'll edit/update this with a critique within an hour of making this post!

Hello!

Here's how I roll: I'll start with a line-by-line, commenting as I go; then I'll talk about concept (what I think works about your idea and what doesn't), execution (where I think the strengths and weaknesses of your presentation lay), and -- finally -- what I think you should do next.

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Good luck with your article!

WRITING RESEARCH POST:

[http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-871935/general-writing-resource-thread#post-2048274 General Writing Resource Thread]

GRAMMAR:

[http://theoatmeal.com/comics/semicolon How To Use A Semicolon: An Oatmeal Comic]

[http://theoatmeal.com/comics/apostrophe It's/its And Apostrophe Use: An Oatmeal Comic]

[http://theoatmeal.com/comics/who_vs_whom How To Use Whom: An Oatmeal Comic]

[http://theoatmeal.com/comics/ie I.E.: An Oatmeal Comic]

[http://bookgeekconfessions.tumblr.com/post/43019744418/writing-tips-8-placement-of-speech-tags Speech Tags Guide]

[http://grammar.about.com/od/punctuationandmechanics/a/punctrules.htm Introduction To Basic Punctuation]

[https://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/how-to-use-commas-a-summary How to Use Commas] / [https://www.grammarly.com/blog/comma/ Comma Explanation]

GUIDES:

[[[guide-hub|Guide Hub]]]

[[[essays-by-a-hack-writing-tales|Essays by a Hack: Writing Tales]]]

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