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Your article is very reminiscent of a Series 1 article, which is a thing that does a thing (a good example would be [[[scp-005 | SCP-005: The Skeleton Key]]]). However, these articles are remnants of the older Foundation style. Nowadays, we focus more on SCPs that have a narrative (look to Series 4 onwards for great examples). It's not to say that we don't have anymore new SCPs which are things that do a thing, however they have to be exceptional in order to attract people's interest.

Some guides/essays that you can read to have a better grasp on how to write your SCP:

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LINKS

[[[how-to-write-an-scp | How To Write An SCP]]]
[[[things-what-do-a-thing-an-essay-on-things | Things That Do A Thing]]]
[[[yourjouney-part-1 | Part I - Introduction & Ideation]]]
[[[yourjouney-part-2 | Part II - Narrative & Originality]]]
[[[ideation |  Ideation: A Guide To Making Good Ideas Out Of Nothing]]]
[[[mackenzie-pitfalls | Dr. Mackenzie's Common SCP Pitfalls]]]

[[[col-hornby-s-audio-guide | Col. Hornby's Audio Guide]]]
[[[and-this-one-explains-humes | An FAQ; Or, What The Hell Is A Hume?]]]
[[[understanding-memetics | Understanding Memetics]]]
[[[mackenzie-glossary | Dr. Mackenzie's Glossary of Terms]]]
[[[the-big-list-of-overdone-scp-cliches | The Big List Of Overdone SCP Cliches]]]
[[[an-exercise-in-narrative-based-scps | An Exercise in Narrative-based SCPs]]]

ACTUAL LINKS

How To Write An SCP
Things That Do A Thing
Part I - Introduction & Ideation
Part II - Narrative & Originality
Understanding Memetics
Dr. Mackenzie's Glossary of Terms
The Big List Of Overdone SCP Cliches
An Exercise in Narrative-based SCPs
Col. Hornby's Audio Guide
Ideation: A Guide To Making Good Ideas Out Of Nothing
Dr. Mackenzie's Common SCP Pitfalls

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